I don’t have any questions for the author. At first glance the draft looks great. I think it should turn into a great project.

◦ What did you like about the draft? How/why did you like it? How might the author build on that section?

Every draft needs work. I think that the author could make minor tweaks to their document. You could elaborate on the goals section of the document.

◦ What sections are confusing to you? How/why? Ask your classmates questions that would help you to make sense of the section.

When reading the draft I am not confused by any part of it. I think that it is well written.

◦ Where would you like to know more? Ask questions!

I do not have any questions for the author. I think this usability test will produce effective results.

◦ Does the draft provide all the requested information listed in the assignment prompt? If not, what is it missing?

I am pretty sure the draft is complete. I think the draft contains all the requested information for the project in the assignment prompt.

◦ Use the”Editing Proofreading Strategies” (http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_edit.html) to focus on some content and structure elements. Try to give specific details and examples of how/why you would revise something.

I cannot see any document errors as a read the draft. You may want to rework your draft because when editing it is always beneficial to read and re read your work for document flow and errors.

◦ Use the same page to focus on some surface and style elements. Try to give specific details and examples of how/why you would revise something.

Looks great keep up the good work! good luck on project 3

I’m glad you hung in there.
Shelley

Great work on making a great plan using bullets and use of headings to help define your goals very efficiently. I can tell you really grasped the material and look forward to seeing your posted product here this weekend.